Tuesday, 23 July 2013

Stephanie's Fan Fiction - The Unknown Companion


What is she?’ Arya was uneasy. She had only recently recovered from her poisoning and torture at the hands of the mad king, to awaken and find herself in Farthen Dur, the underground dwarf city where the Varden were currently hiding out. The new Dragon Rider, Eragon, had rescued her and with the help of his friends, transported her across the country, while actively avoiding the empire, to the only people who possessed the antidote that could save her life. She was grateful, but her mission was of the utmost importance. Find the new Dragon Rider, and take him to Ellesmera, the Elf city where she was born, so that he may learn the ways of the Riders, and grow stronger, strong enough to oppose the king. But the appearance of the young Rider’s female companion was an unexpected shock.

She had seen the woman briefly again while she was in the infirmary, recovering from the effects of the poison. The woman herself seemed to have what looked like arrows protruding from her shoulder and chest. She was also being treated, Arya briefly saw her face before her tired body gave in to sleep, there was one thing she was certain of before she slipped into much needed rest, the woman wasn’t human. That much was clear to Arya, being an Elf, she could sense a foreign strong magical energy emanating from this being. But the woman’s physical attributes alone were enough to convince anyone other than an Elf that she was one of their kind, or perhaps a hybrid between elf and human. She wasn’t fooling Arya, though, this woman was not of her blood. But then that would mean that she was something unknown even to elvenkind, who were considered by many to be the most knowledgeable and powerful of all the races.

A couple of days later Arya had awoken to find no one else in the infirmary, she decided she was healed enough to leave, after all she’d been gone for a while and needed to get back up to speed. As she was leaving she remembered the strange woman, no, creature that she had seen wounded in the infirmary, unable to find an explanation for this person, Arya had pushed her suspicions to the back of her mind, this mystery could wait, at this time she needed to attend to the new Rider, and assess his skills. She needed to know what level he was at in the use of magic and his skill with a blade, she didn’t think he’d be anywhere strong enough to challenge an elf like her, but he needed to be able to beat any other kind of man or creature that might want to kill him. She needed to ensure his survival. She strided gracefully and with purpose, passing the many humans that stared at her in awe, and the dwarves that frowned at her presence in their city, her eyes focused on her destination, paying them no heed. The training area was located right in the centre of the mountain that shielded the Dwarf city from the outside world, the unmistakeable sound of sparring growing louder as she approached. She had found him being ‘assessed’ by those repulsive human magicians, known as “The Twins” in magic competency. Disgusting worthless creatures they were, she knew very well they were only trying to learn what words they could of the Ancient Language, the language of magic, from Eragon under the guise of testing his skills. Arya scared them away with a display of her own magical ability and informs Eragon that she has come to test his swordsmanship skills. She notices the unknown woman, Eragon’s travelling companion, casually observing in the background, Arya beckons for Eragon to follow, striding right past the woman as if she didn’t exist, leading him to the centre of the sparring field. The men made way for them, stopping in the middle of their training to observe the match that was about to take place. Eragon and Arya certainly made a show for them, although she was going easy on him and defended his blows for the most part, he demonstrated some good technique, for a young human boy. Eventually she could tell he was starting to tire and ended the match, with him disarmed and her sword at his chest.

“Not bad Eragon, Brom taught you well, but you need further training.” Arya informed him.

“Eragon!” It was his strange friend, smiling as she approached, in a cat-like saunter, and punching him lightly on the shoulder, “That was a lot better than when you spar with me, Eragon, maybe with a bit more practise you might actually be able to beat me one day.” She smirked and winked at him. Her attitude and the way she spoke was very humanlike, but the way she moved was predatory, Arya didn’t trust her.

“Are you saying that you have more skill with a blade than Eragon?” Arya inquired, taking notice of this person for the first time.

The woman narrowed her violet eyes at the elf. “Well that’s a rather rude way of putting it but until he gets some more experience, he’s not that hard for anyone other than a human to beat.”

Although Arya agreed with her she wasn’t going to let this woman get away with her insolence, and perhaps she could use this battleground to her advantage. “So you admit that you’re not human? Perhaps you would like to demonstrate your skills against me?” Arya dared her, with her eyebrow raised questioningly.

“Not that it is any of your concern what I am, I will gladly take the opportunity to beat an elf at her own game.” She glanced at Eragon who had a rather worried look on his face at this turn of events, smirked at him and Arya and turned to position herself a few paces away, ready.

Now I’ll see what this woman can do. Let the battle begin.’


5 comments:

  1. Cool story:) Is it finished or is there more to come?
    I really like it, I'm intrigued by the 'mysterious elf-woman' character. This makes me want to read the book as well.

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  2. It's finished now, unless anyone has some suggestions for improvement?

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  3. This is a very good fan fiction piece- it took me to another world! The only suggestion I have is to maybe include some more photos- but as far as the writing is, I think you have done very well. I loved the storyline, and I especially like the ending, how there is a build up and then a clean cut right before the action happens. It sounds as though it should be part of series, so perhaps look into writing a second part to it (not necessarily for this class, but in your own time).

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    1. Thanks, it would've been longer but I had to stick to 1000 words. I didn't want to include too many photos from the movie cause I based this on the book and the movie characters are portrayed alot differently to the book, and I don't like them. Maybe I will continue it if I have time, thanks for the feedback. :)

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