Tuesday, 23 July 2013

Stephanie's Fan Fiction - The Unknown Companion


What is she?’ Arya was uneasy. She had only recently recovered from her poisoning and torture at the hands of the mad king, to awaken and find herself in Farthen Dur, the underground dwarf city where the Varden were currently hiding out. The new Dragon Rider, Eragon, had rescued her and with the help of his friends, transported her across the country, while actively avoiding the empire, to the only people who possessed the antidote that could save her life. She was grateful, but her mission was of the utmost importance. Find the new Dragon Rider, and take him to Ellesmera, the Elf city where she was born, so that he may learn the ways of the Riders, and grow stronger, strong enough to oppose the king. But the appearance of the young Rider’s female companion was an unexpected shock.

She had seen the woman briefly again while she was in the infirmary, recovering from the effects of the poison. The woman herself seemed to have what looked like arrows protruding from her shoulder and chest. She was also being treated, Arya briefly saw her face before her tired body gave in to sleep, there was one thing she was certain of before she slipped into much needed rest, the woman wasn’t human. That much was clear to Arya, being an Elf, she could sense a foreign strong magical energy emanating from this being. But the woman’s physical attributes alone were enough to convince anyone other than an Elf that she was one of their kind, or perhaps a hybrid between elf and human. She wasn’t fooling Arya, though, this woman was not of her blood. But then that would mean that she was something unknown even to elvenkind, who were considered by many to be the most knowledgeable and powerful of all the races.

A couple of days later Arya had awoken to find no one else in the infirmary, she decided she was healed enough to leave, after all she’d been gone for a while and needed to get back up to speed. As she was leaving she remembered the strange woman, no, creature that she had seen wounded in the infirmary, unable to find an explanation for this person, Arya had pushed her suspicions to the back of her mind, this mystery could wait, at this time she needed to attend to the new Rider, and assess his skills. She needed to know what level he was at in the use of magic and his skill with a blade, she didn’t think he’d be anywhere strong enough to challenge an elf like her, but he needed to be able to beat any other kind of man or creature that might want to kill him. She needed to ensure his survival. She strided gracefully and with purpose, passing the many humans that stared at her in awe, and the dwarves that frowned at her presence in their city, her eyes focused on her destination, paying them no heed. The training area was located right in the centre of the mountain that shielded the Dwarf city from the outside world, the unmistakeable sound of sparring growing louder as she approached. She had found him being ‘assessed’ by those repulsive human magicians, known as “The Twins” in magic competency. Disgusting worthless creatures they were, she knew very well they were only trying to learn what words they could of the Ancient Language, the language of magic, from Eragon under the guise of testing his skills. Arya scared them away with a display of her own magical ability and informs Eragon that she has come to test his swordsmanship skills. She notices the unknown woman, Eragon’s travelling companion, casually observing in the background, Arya beckons for Eragon to follow, striding right past the woman as if she didn’t exist, leading him to the centre of the sparring field. The men made way for them, stopping in the middle of their training to observe the match that was about to take place. Eragon and Arya certainly made a show for them, although she was going easy on him and defended his blows for the most part, he demonstrated some good technique, for a young human boy. Eventually she could tell he was starting to tire and ended the match, with him disarmed and her sword at his chest.

“Not bad Eragon, Brom taught you well, but you need further training.” Arya informed him.

“Eragon!” It was his strange friend, smiling as she approached, in a cat-like saunter, and punching him lightly on the shoulder, “That was a lot better than when you spar with me, Eragon, maybe with a bit more practise you might actually be able to beat me one day.” She smirked and winked at him. Her attitude and the way she spoke was very humanlike, but the way she moved was predatory, Arya didn’t trust her.

“Are you saying that you have more skill with a blade than Eragon?” Arya inquired, taking notice of this person for the first time.

The woman narrowed her violet eyes at the elf. “Well that’s a rather rude way of putting it but until he gets some more experience, he’s not that hard for anyone other than a human to beat.”

Although Arya agreed with her she wasn’t going to let this woman get away with her insolence, and perhaps she could use this battleground to her advantage. “So you admit that you’re not human? Perhaps you would like to demonstrate your skills against me?” Arya dared her, with her eyebrow raised questioningly.

“Not that it is any of your concern what I am, I will gladly take the opportunity to beat an elf at her own game.” She glanced at Eragon who had a rather worried look on his face at this turn of events, smirked at him and Arya and turned to position herself a few paces away, ready.

Now I’ll see what this woman can do. Let the battle begin.’


Stephanie's Fan Fiction Draft/Plan/Links

I have decided to base my fanfiction on the book/movie Eragon.
There are four books in the series, written by Christopher Paolini, which are very good in my opinion, but the movie adaptation was was virtually a disaster and I find the main character, Eragon, to be somewhat weak and uninspiring in both, considering he is supposedly the only Dragon Rider left who can rise against the mad king, Galbatorix, and save the land and the people from the king's tyranny.

I would like to introduce other strong characters, and possibly other kinds of magic, to an alternate version of the story, which perhaps is told from another characters viewpoint so that Eragon is no longer the centre of everything and the only one with so much responsibility.
For a link to an example of a short fanfic introducing a strange yet powerful character, similar to this idea, click here (Link 1).


More links, Link 2, Link 3 (contrasts between movie and book), Link 4 (side story from POV of unknown character), and an example of how I definitely would not write the characters/storyline, Link 5.









Brief Plot outline/draft

Narrated from Arya's POV. Arya is a major character in the books, not so much the movie.
The new character's name is not given in the final draft because the fanfiction is based on the first meeting of the unknown woman and Arya.
Arya is unsure about the new character, and whether she can be trusted, the fanfic is set near the midway/end of the first book/movie after Eragon, Murtagh and the unknown woman have rescued Arya from prison and traveled across the country and desert to the Boer Mountains in search of the varden, who are the only ones who can cure Arya of the poison she was given in prison.
The fanfic starts after they have found the Varden with the help of the new character, who was also injured in the process of escaping the Urgals, Arya has recovered from Durza’s poison, Murtagh is still confined to a single room, Eragon is being ‘assessed’ by the twin magicians, and Arya has yet to test Eragon's skills in combat.

This is the 1st draft/plot storyline I came up with, the final fanfic differs in the fact that it focuses more on Arya's thoughts and suspicions before her confrontation with the woman, and ends just before their duel.

Original Plot Summary
Arya is wondering about the unknown woman, what is she? For she is obviously not human, nor is she an elf, though her appearance resembles a mixture of both, Arya recognises that the new character is not one of her kind, or any race that she has ever seen or heard of. She soon discovers the woman has strange and unique physical, mental and magical capabilities, beyond most elves and perhaps even riders. Now that Arya is somewhat indebted to this person she cannot ignore the young woman, she thanks her eventually after initially ignoring her presence on the pretext of testing Eragon’s level of competency in magic use. The other woman treats her just as warily and reveals nothing about herself, much to Arya’s annoyance. Arya has heard that this person was badly injured and thinks it strange that she seems to be mostly recovered so soon after the event, there are so many strange things about this person that Arya may never find out. She notices the almost predatory, animal-like way this woman moves and speaks, and knows that she is something different, some kind of human hybrid perhaps, or maybe a Were? She has a similar magic about her that reminds Arya of Solembum, the Werecat, but dismisses it quickly as werecats’ human forms are half the size of normal humans and this woman is obviously not one of their kind, and yet, the similarity…
Arya tests Eragon’s sword skills, he does well for an amateur, well enough not to die too easily, Brom taught him well. After beating Eragon, as of course any elf could beat a human, Arya finds herself in the position of testing the unknown woman’s sword techniques also. In front of a gathering crowd of human male spectators, she decides to see what this woman can do, much to her surprise, she defends all of Arya’s attacks, and makes her own assault, Arya actually having to struggle to parry the woman’s blows, the woman could match her inhuman strength and speed and hold her own. Now this was interesting, eventually Arya slips past the woman’s defences and brings her sword to her neck, only to find her opponent’s sword at her own chest. Guess it’s a tie, Arya is a bit put out that the unknown woman wasn’t defeated by her, but eventually she becomes more interested in the woman’s secrets. There were answers, she just needed to find them, and while she was at it she needed to keep watch over the new Dragon Rider, Eragon, who seemed to trust this other woman with his life, his dragon, Saphira seemed to trust the woman also. Well if she swayed a dragon so easily she must be something special, dragons have a good sense for these things after all.
The Urgals are trying to break into the underground Dwarf city that the Varden are currently based in, Arya, Eragon, Saphira and the mystery woman must prepare for battle, now Arya would really see what she could do.

Draft - The Unknown Companion


What is she?’ Arya was uneasy. She had only recently recovered from her poisoning and torture at the hands of the mad king, to awaken and find herself in Farthen Dur, the underground dwarf city where the Varden were currently hiding out. The new Dragon Rider, Eragon, had rescued her and with the help of his friends, transported her across the country, while actively avoiding the empire, to the only people who possessed the antidote that could save her life. She was grateful, but her mission was of the utmost importance. Find the new Dragon Rider, and take him to Ellesmera, the Elf city where she was born, so that he may learn the ways of the Riders, and grow stronger, strong enough to oppose the king. But the appearance of the young Rider’s female companion was an unexpected shock.

She had seen the woman briefly again while she was in the infirmary, recovering from the effects of the poison. The woman herself seemed to have what looked like arrows protruding from her shoulder and chest. She was also being treated, Arya briefly saw her face before her tired body gave in to sleep, there was one thing she was certain of before she slipped into much needed rest, the woman wasn’t human. That much was clear to Arya, being an Elf, she could sense a foreign strong magical energy emanating from this being. But the woman’s physical attributes alone were enough to convince anyone other than an Elf that she was one of their kind, or perhaps a hybrid between elf and human. She wasn’t fooling Arya, though, this woman was not of her blood. But then that would mean that she was something unknown even to elvenkind, who were considered by many to be the most knowledgeable and powerful of all the races. 

A couple of days later Arya had awoken to find no one else in the infirmary, she decided she was healed enough to leave, after all she’d been gone for a while and needed to get back up to speed. As she was leaving she remembered the strange woman, no, creature that she had seen wounded in the infirmary, unable to find an explanation for this person, Arya had pushed her suspicions to the back of her mind, this mystery could wait, at this time she needed to attend to the new Rider, and assess his skills. She needed to know what level he was at in the use of magic and his skill with a blade, she didn’t think he’d be anywhere strong enough to challenge an elf like her, but he needed to be able to beat any other kind of man or creature that might want to kill him. She needed to ensure his survival. She strided gracefully and with purpose, passing the many humans that stared at her in awe, and the dwarves that frowned at her presence in their city, her eyes focused on her destination, paying them no heed. The training area was located right in the centre of the mountain that shielded the Dwarf city from the outside world, the unmistakeable sound of sparring growing louder as she approached. She had found him being ‘assessed’ by those repulsive human magicians, known as “The Twins” in magic competency. Disgusting worthless creatures they were, she knew very well they were only trying to learn what words they could of the Ancient Language, the language of magic, from Eragon under the guise of testing his skills. Arya scared them away with a display of her own magical ability and informs Eragon that she has come to test his swordsmanship skills. She notices the unknown woman, Eragon’s travelling companion, casually observing in the background, Arya beckons for Eragon to follow, striding right past the woman as if she didn’t exist, leading him to the centre of the sparring field. The men made way for them, stopping in the middle of their training to observe the match that was about to take place. Eragon and Arya certainly made a show for them, although she was going easy on him and defended his blows for the most part, he demonstrated some good technique, for a young human boy. Eventually she could tell he was starting to tire and ended the match, with him disarmed and her sword at his chest.

“Not bad Eragon, Brom taught you well, but you need further training.” Arya informed him.

“Eragon!” It was his strange friend, smiling as she approached, in a cat-like saunter, and punching him lightly on the shoulder, “That was a lot better than when you spar with me, Eragon, maybe with a bit more practise you might actually be able to beat me one day.” She smirked and winked at him. Her attitude and the way she spoke was very human like, but the way she moved was predatory, Arya didn’t trust her.

“Are you saying that you have more skill with a blade than Eragon?” Arya inquired, taking notice of this person for the first time.

The woman narrowed her violet eyes at the elf. “Well that’s a rather rude way of putting it but until he gets some more experience, he’s not that hard for anyone other than a human to beat.”

Although Arya agreed with her she wasn’t going to let this woman get away with her insolence, and perhaps she could use this battleground to her advantage. “So you admit that you’re not human? Perhaps you would like to demonstrate your skills against me?” Arya dared her, with her eyebrow raised questioningly.

“Not that it is any of your concern what I am, I will gladly take the opportunity to beat an elf at her own game.” She glanced at Eragon who had a rather worried look on his face at this turn of events, smirked at him and Arya and turned to position herself a few paces away, ready.

Now I’ll see what this woman can do. Let the battle begin.’


Michaela's fan fiction draft and plan

The movie poster



 I am basing my fan fiction on "The wild things" by Dave Eggers (based on "Where the wild things are" by Maurice Sendak). I'm setting my story ten years in the future, when Max is eighteen and a university student, studying biochemistry. He has been wrongly diagnosed with bipolar disorder and has developed a dependence on anti-depressants. When he attempts to stop taking them, he returns to see the wild things again.




I discovered there isn't a whole lot of where the wild things are fan-fiction. However I managed to find a few.

1-Somewhere-in-the-Between
This fan fiction is set several years in the future when Max is sixteen and he is a troubled and angst-ridden teenager, suffering from headaches and seizures. I thought this fanfiction was really interesting and well written. It grabbed my curiosity because I was wondering who the new character of Liam was, and what part he played in the story. Although I personally feel the Max in this story is angrier and more troubled than the Max in the original. Also this story doesn't have an ending which is frustrating as I never got to find out about Liam :(

2-Where-MY-Wild-Things-Are
This one was quite a touching story about somebody having a conversation with toys from Where the wild things are, and helping a toy lion to reach his dream of being a wild thing. It is very short, but sweet. However there is not much relevance to the original characters.

3-Where-The-Wild-Things-Are-2
 In this fan fiction the author is envisioning a sequel to the movie, in which the wild things venture into the human world to visit Max. I have to admit I didn't finish reading this story as I didn't like it. There was a lot of pointless information and it dragged a little. I don't think the story was believable and didn't really capture the essence of the movie. It was also very long, about 20 chapters in total.

4-Inside-All-Of-Us-Is-A-Wild-Thing
In this story Max is grown up and has a daughter.  It's a short story or possibly unfinished, but I liked it and thought the idea of Max's child visiting the wild things was interesting.

5-Queen-of-the-Wild-Things
This story is set just one year after Max's visit to the Wild things. However the author has used herself as the main protagonist. I think it captured the mood of the original quite well.




Let the Wild Rumpus continue


Max had always hated waiting rooms, the glaring fluorescent light, the sound of hacking coughs, and the mind-dulling collection of gossip magazines. They were places of sickness and suffering. Max felt like he’d spent too much time in waiting rooms, ever since he was ten years old and had been given his first bottle of pills. 

Tossing aside a dog-eared copy of ‘OK!’ magazine, he glanced at the clock. Quarter past ten. Doctor Robyn was running late. Max hoped she’d hurry up, he had a biology lecture in an hour and he didn’t want to be late.

“Max Conway?” A small Filipina woman appeared in the doorway. “Doctor Robyn will see you now.” 

Max shuffled down the corridor as if he was walking to his execution. It had been awhile since Max had seen Doctor Robyn, but she had the same horn-rimmed glasses and careworn expression he remembered.

“Max, how can I help you?” she asked.

“I wanted to talk to you about my pills. I think I’m ready to stop taking them. I mean- I’ve been much better lately.”

“Have you stopped having the dreams?”  

“Yes,” Max lied. There was no way he was gonna tell her he was still seeing Carol, Douglas, Katherine, and all the rest, sometimes several times a week. That would only get him a stronger dose of medication and another visit to Doctor Stanley.

 “Well you’re eighteen now Max, the decision is yours” Doctor Robyn gave him a dubious look. “But I would strongly advise against it.”

The first thing Max noticed after he stopped taking the pills was he had all this extra energy. He started going for bike rides through the woods, something he hadn’t done for years.

The second thing he noticed was that he felt everything so much more. Things that normally wouldn’t excite him felt like Christmas morning. Things that normally wouldn’t bother him filled him with irritation and anger. 

 Saturday evening Max felt wild with energy, so he leaped onto his bike and pedalled into the woods. As trees turned into greenish blurs, the wind howled in his ears and Max howled with it. He kept riding till he could go no further. Bending down to catch his breath Max heard a strange, but familiar, sound. He ran into the clearing where a large lake stretched out before him, a small boat docked by the edge of the water. Max had been here before. He knew what to do.

Max had barely set foot on the sandy island when he spotted several figures, tall as houses, gathered around a clump of trees.  He sprinted toward them with an excitement he hadn’t felt in a long time. He leaped onto the back of one of the creatures, entwining his hands in the thick fur and breathing that comforting smell. Carol whirled round, a shocked expression on his face.

“It’s me! Max! I came back, like I said I would!”

Carol paused for a moment, before enveloping Max in a big hug. “I missed you Max.”

 Even though Max and Carol hadn’t parted on the best of terms (Carol had been in a foul mood and had threatened to eat Max) they still loved each other. The other Wild things regarded Max with a mixture of surprise and happiness. Except for Judith, who wore her usual expression of mild disdain. She was probably Max’s least favourite of the Wild things.

It then occurred to Max that somebody was missing.“Where’s Katherine?”

“She’s feeling a bit sick,” Carol frowned.

Alexander pawed at the ground excitedly. “He doesn’t know!”

“Know what?”

“Katherine and Carol are having a baby!”

“No way! That’s awesome!”

Max had never really thought of the Wild things as being parents. He hadn’t even realized it was possible.  Pushing aside unwanted mental images, Max asked if he could see Katherine.

“Maybe a bit later, she needs to rest at the moment” Carol said. “I know, you can bring her dinner. Boy will she be surprised to see you!”
As Max trod through the forest, his hands full of grubs, he spotted a large auburn-coloured hill. “Katherine?” he called out.

Katherine raised her head, wearily. She looked exhausted, her long hair covered in twigs and dirt. 

“Who are you?” she eyed Max suspiciously. “You remind me of somebody…”

“Was that somebody called Max, by any chance?” he giggled.

“It is you! I knew I’d seen you before!”

“Are you all right?” Max knelt down beside her. “You don’t look too good.”

“I’m fine, I mean I’m really tired but I’m sure I’ll feel better soon. I should probably rest. Sorry Max, I’d love to talk but I’m exhausted.”

Max walked off, feeling a strange mixture of excitement and worry.

A few nights later Max and the Wild things were cuddled up in a gigantic pile, when a loud groaning noise awoke Max from his slumber.

“Katherine, are you O.K?”

“No…” she moaned. “I can’t breathe… –I think the baby’s coming!”

The other Wild things were looking round, bleary eyed. 

“What’s going on?”

“The baby's coming!” Max shouted.

Carol jumped to his feet. “What do we do?”

Max wasn’t sure, but he thought somebody ought to do something. He rushed to Katherine’s side and put a hand on her shoulder. Carol was on the other side, leaning over Katherine.

“Its O.K baby, it’ll be fine” he tried to sound soothing but his voice was high and panic-filled. 

Max had never seen a baby being born before, but he’d watched plenty of TV shows. They usually instructed the mother to take deep breaths, and push.

“Deep breaths Katherine,” he coaxed. “And push as hard as you can!”

Katherine let out a deafening scream and for a second Max thought she was going to pass out. And then it was over. Katherine lay on her back, while Carol stroked her hair.

Max had expected the baby to be tiny but it was almost as long as he was, and covered in thick auburn fur, like Katherine’s. Atop his head were two curved horns, similar to Carol’s.

Carol stared in wonder. “He’s gorgeous!” Max didn’t know how Carol could tell it was a he. Maybe it was the horns?

“Would you like to give him a cuddle Max?” Katherine whispered.

 Max leaned forward tentatively, and wrapped his arms around the new Wild thing. A drop of cool water hit Max in the eye. He looked down at his soggy t-shirt, and realized it had been raining. And rain had never felt better.



Feel free to ad any suggestions, comments or soul-crushing criticism :) Is it easy to read, or too spaced out? Should I change anything?


Michaela's fan-fiction

                                   Let the Wild Rumpus continue


 



Max had always hated waiting rooms, the glaring fluorescent lights, the hacking coughs, and the mind-dulling collection of gossip magazines. They were places of sickness and suffering. Max felt like he’d spent too much time in waiting rooms, ever since he was ten years old and had been given his first bottle of pills. 

Tossing aside a dog-eared copy of ‘OK!’ magazine, he glanced at the clock. Quarter past ten. Doctor Robyn was running late. Max hoped she’d hurry up, he had a biology lecture in an hour and he didn’t want to miss it.

“Max Conway?” A small Filipino woman appeared in the doorway. “Doctor Robyn will see you now.” 

Max shuffled down the corridor as if he was walking to his execution. It had been awhile since Max had seen Doctor Robyn, but she still wore the same horn-rimmed glasses and careworn expression.

“Max, how can I help you?” she asked.

“I wanted to talk to you about my pills. I think I’m ready to stop taking them. I mean- I’ve been much better lately.”

“Have you stopped having the dreams?”  

“Yes,” Max lied. There was no way he was gonna tell her he was still seeing Carol, Douglas, Katherine, and all the rest, sometimes several times a week. That would only get him a stronger dose of medication and another visit to Doctor Stanley.
 
“Well you’re eighteen now Max, the decision is yours” Doctor Robyn gave him a dubious look. “But I would strongly advise against it.”

The first thing Max noticed after he stopped taking the pills was he had all this extra energy. He started going for bike rides through the woods, something he hadn’t done for years.

 second thing he noticed was that he felt everything so much more. Things that normally wouldn’t excite him felt like Christmas morning. Things that normally wouldn’t bother him filled him with irritation and anger. 
 
Saturday evening Max felt wild with energy, so he leaped onto his bike and pedalled into the woods. As trees turned into greenish blurs, the wind howled in his ears and Max howled with it. He kept riding till he could go no further. Bending to catch his breath, Max heard a strange, but familiar, sound. He ran into the clearing where a large lake stretched out before him, a small boat docked by the edge of the water. Max had been here before. He knew what to do.

The boat ride to the island didn't take as long as Max had remembered, only a few hours. He had barely set foot on the shore when he spotted several figures, tall as houses, gathered around a clump of trees.  He sprinted toward them with an excitement he hadn’t felt in a long time. He leaped onto the back of one of the creatures, entwining his hands in the thick fur and breathing that comforting smell. Carol whirled round, a shocked expression on his face.

Carol
 


“It’s me! Max! I came back, like I said I would!”
Carol paused for a moment, before enveloping Max in a big hug. “I missed you Max.”
 
Even though Max and Carol hadn’t parted on the best of terms (Carol had been in a foul mood and had threatened to eat Max) they still loved each other. The other Wild things regarded Max with a mixture of surprise and happiness. Except for Judith, who wore her usual expression of mild disdain. She was probably Max’s least favourite of the Wild things.
 

It then occurred to Max that somebody was missing.“Where’s Katherine?”
“She’s feeling a bit sick,” Carol frowned.
Alexander pawed at the ground excitedly. “He doesn’t know!”
“Know what?”
“Katherine and Carol are having a baby!”
“No way! That’s awesome!”

Max had never really thought of the Wild things as being parents. He hadn’t even realized it was possible.  Pushing aside unwanted mental images, Max asked if he could see Katherine.
 
 
“Maybe a bit later, she needs to rest at the moment” Carol said. “I know, you can bring her dinner. Boy will she be surprised to see you!”


As Max trod through the forest, his hands full of grubs, he spotted a large auburn-coloured hill. “Katherine?” he called out.
Katherine

 Katherine raised her head, wearily. She looked exhausted, her long hair covered in twigs and dirt. 

“Who are you?” she eyed Max suspiciously. “You remind me of somebody…”

“Was that somebody called Max, by any chance?” he giggled.

“It is you! I knew I’d seen you before!"

“Are you all right?” Max knelt down beside her. “You don’t look too good.”

“I’m fine, I mean I’m really tired but I’m sure I’ll feel better soon. I should probably rest. Sorry Max, I’d love to talk but I’m exhausted.”

Max walked off, feeling a strange mixture of elation and unease.

A few nights later Max and the Wild things were cuddled up in a gigantic pile, when a loud groaning noise awoke Max from his slumber.

“Katherine, are you O.K?”

“No…” she moaned. “I can’t breathe… –I think the baby’s coming!”

The other Wild things were looking round, bleary eyed. 

“What’s going on?”

“The baby's coming!” Max shouted.

Carol jumped to his feet. “What do we do?”

Max wasn’t sure, but he thought somebody ought to do something. He rushed to Katherine’s side and put a hand on her shoulder. Carol was on the other side, leaning over Katherine.

“Its O.K baby, it’ll be fine” he tried to sound soothing but his voice was high and panic-filled. 

Max had never seen a baby being born before, but he’d watched plenty of TV shows. They usually instructed the mother to take deep breaths, and push.

“Deep breaths Katherine,” he coaxed. “And push as hard as you can!”

Katherine let out a deafening scream and for a second Max thought she was going to pass out. And then it was over. Katherine lay on her back, while Carol stroked her hair.

Max had expected the baby to be tiny but it was almost as long as he was, and covered in thick auburn fur, like Katherine’s. Atop his head were two curved horns, similar to Carol’s.

Carol stared in wonder. “He’s gorgeous!” Max didn’t know how Carol could tell it was a he. Maybe it was the horns?

“Would you like to give him a cuddle Max?” Katherine whispered.
 
Max leaned forward tentatively, and wrapped his arms around the new Wild thing. A drop of cool water hit him in the eye. Looking down at his soggy t-shirt he realized it had been raining. And rain had never felt better.

Amy-Claire's Fan Fiction- The Mother



18th March, 2008
Dear Diary,
I know I haven’t written in you for a while, I have been busy trying to find out who I want to be. I have decided  that I want to go to College. The idea was born in my mind at the Luna St Patrick’s party last night.  I found myself taking a sip every time someone talked of their career, or college years. I guess my mind wanted to wash away the self-guilt I held. Needless to say I found myself stumbling home in the rain, wishing there was someone waiting for me in a warm bed, and a new day of excitement waiting to greet me in the morning. Instead I woke to my mind pounding at the door of my eyes, and no bud of excitement ready to bloom. I had to pry myself out of bed to go back to Luna’s to look for Gran’s umbrella, and there it was in a puddle of rain and tears from the night before. Seeing it reminded me of what she would always say “Crisitn, I use this bright yellow umbrella because it is always important to choose brightness in the darkest of times”. So that is why today I am creating my own excitement and setting out to accomplish goals I have always wanted to achieve. I think for the first time in my life, I am going to stop focusing on finding someone to complete me, and instead focus on completing myself.







18th May, 2009
Dear Diary,
Today was a step towards a bright future. My first day at University was dripping in a new kind of enthusiasm. Something within me just lit up, and I knew that I was in the right place, doing the right thing- funnily enough, my first lecturer had no idea where he was, delivering a whole class on Architecture rather than Economics! It was wonderful to start the day with laughter, but I did feel sorry for him. It was comforting being around thousands of other people evolving a new part of their lives. I found the beginning of my path today, and I know that there will be steep hills, with broken staircases at time, but I am moving forward and that is all that matters. 







11th January, 2010
Dear Diary,
Sorry it has been a while since I have written in you. But I have been living! (Which translates to studying) I am hardly home, and when I am I lock myself up in my room and read books thick with everything economics, while listening to Belle and Sebastian CDs. Surprisingly I don’t miss my social life, or my search for a stable love life. Which has appeared to be even more of an untouchable reality after hearing that Cindy broke up with a man she was dating, when they realised that they had devoted time to each other, without really knowing anything about the other, or sharing anything in common. I have been there; you fill in the empty spaces with false ideas of who people are, and then one day the illusion crumbles.
 I am in love though, in love with the endless amount of knowledge waiting to be touched, and read and absorbed into a mind that has been starved of it for so long. I have also taken up guitar again, an old love that I missed without realising, and joined a wedding band as their bassist. Looking at where I was a year ago, I am eager to continue growing and being comfortable by myself. I just have to keep moving forward.

“What did you learn from your time in the solitary Cell of your mind? There was noises, distractions from anything good”- Belle and Sebastian- The boy with the Arab Strap









30th November, 2012
 Dear Diary,
I know it has been a few weeks since I turned all my thoughts into ink, so I will give you an update. Louis finally asked me out, and I now practically live with him. He has soft eyes, and softer hands, but at times his heart is cold. Over the years I have dedicated so much time to finding myself, and although I believe it is a never ending process, I think that I am close to being a complete person. But now I meet people and recognise the same emptiness in their eyes. Louis is one of those half-full souls. I know that he needs to find who he is on his own, but I can’t help but be drawn into his belief that he needs me to complete him. Happiness makes him bitter when he can’t have a drink of it himself. We spend nights talking about the future, but he ends up cutting the ideas at the seams and injecting the night in a negative murkiness. I love him, and would do anything for him. But I believe that I am a cave flower, growing more and more towards the light, while he is still a wallowing weed drinking in the darkness and afraid to move up. I have been where he is and I hope he can find a way out of the dark too, because I cannot shrink back into the cave again, no matter how much I love him. 











20th August, 2013
  Dear Diary,

I have walked the ever changing path, I have climbed the broken staircases and fixed the cracked pieces of me, all to end up at the top of a mountain waiting for a train in the rain to take me to the next chapter of my life- and I meet a man. Ted Mosby, the man with the wise brown eyes and youthful smile. He was at the wedding that I played at last night. I was captivated by his speech, and recognised him from my first day at university- the lecturer in the wrong place. But this time he was in the right place, and so was I. There was a warmth between us, far greater than any amount of rain could diffuse. Obviously, we have just met, but there was no mistaking that our souls clicked. I do not know what the future holds, whether he will be sewn into it, or be another stop on the route of life. But I am stitched in excitement to find out where the two of us will go together. I am not going to get ahead of myself, but I am no longer in the cave and will not hide from the possibilities life may be offering. Our first date is tomorrow night, I wonder if it will be our last…