Monday, 19 August 2013

Rebecca Mahoney's Fan Fiction

The Bistro on East 43rd

Eve Kendall slipped unnoticed into a corner bistro on the Upper East Side as a mild June afternoon settled beneath the Manhattan skyline.

The first to arrive, Eve perched primly on a stool at the mahogany panelled bar.  She handed her coat and hat to the porter, one gloved hand pushing the back of her ice blonde hair off her bare shoulders. A smartly uniformed barman stood before her, blocking the reflection she was admiring in the angled bar mirror.

“May I offer you something to drink Ma’am?”

“A Tom Collins, please. Without the cherry.”

Eve smoothed her dress and from a small brown leather purse, reapplied her crimson lipstick in the now unobstructed mirror. As usual, her outfit was carefully considered: A cream silk grosgrain dress, off the shoulder bodice and a full skirt to the calf with matching gloves and black stilettos.

A tall man in a double breasted suit sat across the bar from her, still wearing his hat. One eye was dark and piercing, the other covered by a suede patch of indeterminable colour. He drained his martini glass and signalled the barman for another, the gaze of his good eye never leaving Eve.

Cantilevered shutters cast dappled light across the restaurant, the exhale of Eve’s cigarette sending striped plumes of blue smoke dancing across the window. She turned her attention to the door, where a couple enter arm in arm and are seated in a booth by the door. Seeing that it wasn’t Roger she glanced at her wrist watch and returned to her drink.

Eve’s thoughts were interrupted by the waiter presenting a note on a small silver tray. Roger will be fifteen minutes late.

The one eyed man was still watching. Uneasy, Eve ordered another Collins and sipped it quietly, conscious of the man’s steely focus.

A siren wailed in the distance.
*

Ten minutes earlier Roger Thornhill was running down Lexington. The billowing smoke from eight blocks in front sent panic through his body and he knew he was going to be late. A siren cried out not far ahead, stopping the intersection at East 73rd. Imagining his new wife’s icey glare at his tardiness; Roger ran faster.
*

Ice cubes clinking at the bottom of her high ball gave Eve an excuse to retire to the powder room.  Looking over her shoulder, the one eyed man was watching. Feeling her pulse quicken, Eve locked the door behind her and sat at the small dresser in the entrance. Her tortoiseshell comb caught a strand of hair by the nape of her neck and broke.  She straightened and a familiar feeling of guilt mixed with fear stirred in her ribcage.

The one eyed man had moved two seats closer when Eve returned to the bar.  Roger was nowhere to be seen. Another drink materialised and Eve had only just sought refuge in the murmurings of her mind again when a grey Mercedes hurtled across the side walk and through the front window of the bistro.

As with the aftermath of many a disaster; a state of flux ensued. Screaming drinkers and diners were enveloped by dust and broken glass, falling masonry narrowly missing scattered bodies and thumping onto the bonnet of the badly damaged car. A steady stream of vapour cascaded from the Mercedes. The smoke lifted and those patrons able to walk stumbled towards the clearing.
Eve surfaced unharmed from under the booth she was thrown towards. Barely visible through the rubble, the driver of the grey Mercedes was crumpled motionless over the steering wheel. She pulled away the badly damaged door and cleared a hasty space on the ground with her foot to drag the man from his seat. 

The driver was dead. The young man dropped heavily to Eve's feet, his glassy eyes unresponsive. Reeling, Eve discovered the driver's hands were tied behind his back. Tucked into the noose knot fastening was a note. Trembling, Eve unfolded it. 

YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED, MISS KENDALL.

Stumbling backwards, Eve turned on her heel and fled what remained of the restaurant. Hailing a cab through the surging crowd, she climbed in, failing to notice a man with a suede eye patch watching from the phone booth.
 
"To Grand Central. Now."

*

Gasping for air, Roger arrived to a chaotic scene. Emergency staff were everywhere and the remaining rubberneckers were milling about or slowly retreating back into apartments and stores to speculate further. It took Roger only a moment to realise that Eve was not there. Feeling ill, Roger bent over the curb and recomposed himself. 

Just beyond his knees, a folded note fluttered in the drain. An instinctive cold sweat broke across his neck and he reached forward, the piece of paper flitting dangerously close to the storm water channel.  Roger opened it at the same time the cold metal of a .38 revolver firmly pressed between his shoulder blades.


 *


THE END

Sunday, 18 August 2013

Lavu Vallabh final copy . "The Heart Breaker"


It’s another day for the man of steel.  He wakes up early as usual and puts on his suit while Lois is already in the kitchen making breakfast. Clark flies to the city to grab Lois some flowers and gets back for breakfast in no time. The food is ready and Lois always makes sure her man of steel is well fed before he begins his day and therefore goes through the trouble of making a massive breakfast such as bacon and eggs, hash browns, pancakes cereal and porridge. Louise might as well just cook everything in the kitchen. They sit down outside and enjoy their food and beverages. The sun shines right across the field leaving the grass burnt and crispy the perfect area for raising a child. He kisses her on the lips and says good-bye. Lois doesn’t work because Clark forces her to stay home and be a housewife. However Lois is unhappy and sad because she was once the worlds best news reporter and now she lives in her own shadow afraid to make a stand against the man of steel. Her friends and family who know of her relationship think that she is in the perfect relationship but she is merely afraid of her own husband. Lois wakes up and makes breakfast, cleans up the house, does the washing and prepares dinner. The two don’t have dinner together because Clark always arrives late. Lois goes to bed by herself most nights and some nights she satisfies herself because the couple never have time to make love. However when they do get intimate with each other the couple lack creativity. Lois and Clarks sex life is like a library very boring and nothing exciting ever happens.

3 miles form Lois and Clarks house a new neighbour has just recently moved in. His name is Wolverine an ex soldier and superhero. Wolverine was once a member of the X-men and after loosing his wife he went awol. His wife was raped by 3 men and stabbed 15 times. Wolverine killed the three murderers including their families. However this was a long time ago back in 1990 and he was not charged but only kicked out from the X-men. Lois welcomes their only neighbour by baking him a banana cake. When Lois arrives at Wolverines house, the tough and scary man that everyone takes him for simply blushes, as he is shy. He opens the door and welcomes her in and takes the cake and her bag so that she wouldn’t have to carry anything to the kitchen. They sat down for a cup of tea wolverine was so fascinated at Lois is beauty because it had reminded him about his wife. Lois was admiring wolverines figure and she was talking very fast because she was nervous. She was getting turned on just starring a Wolverine, however Lois was trying to play it cool because she was unsure if he was interested. Wolverine was blinded by Lois is beauty and the two felt the chemistry immediately. Despite the sexual tension between the two Lois decides to leave as she comes back to her senses and realises that she is in a relationship. As they walk to the door they both reach for the handle and their hands touch and suddenly they both stop and look at each other. Wolverine looks into her eyes and grabs her closer to his body; they kiss and aggressively take each other’s clothes off. Everything has escalates quickly Lois is so lost in the moment she does not stop to think about what she is doing, however as they get more intimate with each other the more she forgets about the man of steel.

When Lois gets home she can’t stop thinking about wolverine. Her emotions skyrocket and she can’t stop cleaning the house, over and over again, wiping the benches, sweeping the floor, cleaning the windows and constantly moping the floor. The house is quiet which sets Lois is mood. She grabs a knife and holds it against her heart. Her hands are slippery from crying. Ashamed and embarrassed and her head and heart are in a constant battle with mixed emotions of what she did. She is so lost in her own mind that she can’t believe that it has come down to this. Lois has always been the type of girl that has always been committed in a relationship however what she did with Wolverine felt so right for her. She can’t stop thinking about what happen and she does not want to tell Clark but Lois knows that he deserves to know the truth. Lois comes to her senses and puts the knife down. Lois decides to be honest with Clark and see where their relationship stands. Someone knocks at the door and Lois quickly reacts to answering the door that she slips across the kitchen, as the floor was still wet from her moping and Lois knocks her head on the corner of the bench. Another knock and all you hear is silence and suddenly the floor is painted in red. The door opens and a man walks in and he is holding the superman suit and roses with a little card. Its Clark, he sees his wife on the floor bleeding he immediately flies her over to the hospital. Lois died that night, however the contents of Clarks letter was “Lois I quit being the worlds saviour all I want now is to save our relationship, I love you.”

Tuesday, 13 August 2013

Lavu Vallabh - Final draft


It’s another day for the man of steel.  He wakes up early as usual and puts on his superhero suit while Lois is already in the kitchen making breakfast. Clark flies to the city to grab Lois some flowers and gets back for breakfast in no time. The food is ready and Louise always makes sure her man of steel is well fed before he begins his day of saving the world. Therefore she goes through the trouble of making bacon and eggs, hash browns, pancakes cereal and porridge. Louise might as well just cook everything in the kitchen. They sit down outside on the deck and enjoy their food and orange juice. The sun shines right across the field leaving the grass burnt and crispy the perfect area for raising a child. He kisses her on the lips and says good-bye. Louise doesn’t work because Clark forces her to stay home and be a housewife. However Lois is unhappy and sad because she was once the worlds best news reporter and now she lives in her own shadow afraid to make a stand against the man of steel. Her friends and family who know of her relationship think that she is in the perfect relationship but she is merely afraid of her own husband. Lois wakes up and makes breakfast, cleans up the house, does the washing and also makes dinner. The two don’t have dinner together because Clark always arrives late. Lois goes to bed by herself most nights and some nights she plays with herself because Clark never has time to satisfy her or is never around. However when they do get intimate with each other the both lack creativity. Lois and Clarks sex life is like a library very boring and nothing exciting ever happens.

3 miles form Lois and Clarks house a new neighbor has just recently moved in. His name is wolverine an ex soldier and superhero. Wolverine was once a member of the X-men and after loosing his wife he went awol. His wife was raped by 3 men and stabbed 15 times. Wolverine tracked all three men and killed them including their families. However this was a long time ago back in 1990 and it’s been 23 years since that incident. Lois welcomes their only neighbor by baking him a banana cake. When Lois arrives at wolverines house the tough and scary man that everyone takes him for simply blushes, as he is shy. He opens the door and welcomes her in and takes the cake and her bag so that she wouldn’t have to carry anything to the kitchen. As they sat down for a cup of tea wolverine was so fascinated at Lois is beauty because it had reminded him about his wife. Lois was admiring wolverines figure and she was talking very fast because she was nervous. She was getting turned just starring a wolverine and in that very moment she forgot about Clark and wanted some sex. However Lois was trying to play it cool because she was unsure if he was interested. Wolverine was blinded by Lois is beauty and the two felt the chemistry immediately. Despite the sexual tension between the two Lois decides to leave as she comes back to her senses and realizing she is in a relationship. As the walk to the door they both reach for the handle and their hands touch and suddenly they both stop and look at each other. Wolverine looks into her eyes and grabs her closer to his body; they kiss and aggressively take each other’s clothes off. Everything has escalates quickly Lois is so lost in the moment she does not stop to think about what she is doing, however as they get more intimate with each other the more she forgets about the man of steel.

When Lois gets home she feels ashamed of what she did but at the same time she can’t stop thinking about wolverine. She’s hasn’t felt like this about someone since her and Clark started dating.  Despite what she is feeling towards wolverine she is feeling guilty of what she did. She cleans the house over and over again trying to keep busy. 

Tuesday, 6 August 2013

Lavu Vallabh plan


Genre
  • action
  • romantic   
Targeted audience
  • the intended audience will be based on young adults who have a sense of humor because the story will include some hilarious events that may be rude for younger audiences.
Plot
  • superman is in a relationship with Lois Lane and while superman is out and about saving the world Lois Lane is lonely and left at home as a house girl. However their neighbor Logan who is a farmer and a ex superhero notices how lonely Lois so he tries to make Mrs Lane fall in love with him.
Characters
  • Superman- a superhero and a the peoples champion and lives by the law. He is also in disguised as a reporter and is a very gentle person. However superman is a hero who is so focused on his job as a superhero that he forgets the people that he loves so dearly by living his life as a superhero 90% at the time and 10% as a family man. 
  • Logan-is a bad ass super hero. He was involved in the X-men group which is a group that involves mutants and they use their powers for the good of mankind. However Logan is convinced that he needs no one to help him be a superhero so decides to leave the group and start his own life.
  • Louis Lane- is a reporter from metropolis and usually finds herself in the middle of danger. However 90% of the time she is saved my superman and also falls in love with superman.
Point of view
  • third person
Example of Fan Fiction 
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9007746/1/Two-Evils

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9633799/1/Candles-in-the-Wind-Part-1

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9591056/1/Trouble-maker

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9634081/1/Que-pasa

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8743815/1/Mutant-School


Tuesday, 30 July 2013

Eleah's Fan Fiction Draft / Plan

Outline


I have chosen ‘The Time Traveler’s Wife’ by Audrey Niffeneger, as the canon for my fan-fiction. The fan fiction’s main protagonist is Alba, Henry & Claire’s daughter, who time-travels into the future and finds it difficult to return to her present.

Like her father, Alba is chrono-displaced, meaning she can’t control when or where she travels, and usually gets pulled back into the past, but rarely in the future, where there is a significance for them.

I will structure the story the way that the original book was. I will write the date, and the age of the characters, so the readers do not get confused. The readers will also be reading from Alba’s point of view. I am introducing a new character, Flynn, who doesn't believe and accept the idea o time-traveling.


Here are examples of fan-fiction for this book: Link 1. Link 2. Link 3. Link 4. Link 5.


Plot (so far) / Synopsis
16-year old Alba travels from 1997 to 2011. A few weeks later, she realises that she may be staying longer than she would want to.

Eventually, she meets Flynn, her 15-year old son in the future, who tells her how he thinks that his mother may be crazy, as she claims that she can once travel through time. She goes and seeks Flynn's mother, not realizing that she is an older version of herself, hoping that she has the solution, and stop time travelling.

Eleah's Fan Fiction

[Disclaimer: All creative right belong to their original creators. No copyright infringement intended.]


Encounter

October 6, 1997 / March 2, 2011
(Alba is 16 & 30)

My footsteps as I sprint towards my bedroom create a loud thudding noise. I bury myself under my covers knowing that I will soon vanish and be pushed forwards or pulled backwards by Time. My hands and toes start to tingle, and suddenly they start to dissolve into the unknown.

I vanish completely and find myself standing in the middle of some small town. I think I’m still in Chicago. Unfortunately, I can’t bring anything with me whenever I time travel. Luckily, this town’s dry cleaning shop seems empty of people, but the machines are running, so I sneak in, stop one of it and hope there is something there that would keep me warm.

Walking towards a cafe, I decided to approach the man standing beside the door, lighting up his cigarette and ask him the date. His name tag states that his name is Flynn.

“Second of March,” he replies.

“What year are we in?” I hesitate

“What year are you from?” he mumbles sarcastically. “2011.”

Oh no. Why 2011?

May 19, 2011 * 4:15 PM

Somehow, I managed to settle down easier than I expected. I found my own flat and am working as a barista at a local café. Trying your best to blend in and not make much connection is harder than you would expect. Sometimes, I would keep on walking, hoping Time will pull me in at will. Still, I stay. I thought I’m simply stuck here, for no reason, until that afternoon where me and Flynn are just sitting on the steps of the café, during our break from work. There was an awkward eerie of silence before I understood why I travelled to the future.

“You know, sometimes I think me and Dad made the wrong decision admitting Mum in the rehab, but then I remember how many lies she can make up. She’s apparently chrono-displaced. She can supposedly time-travel and has met my granddad a few times, who by the way, died when she was five,” he rants.

Out of curiosity, I asked what her mother’s name is. He points at my nametag. Alba.

“What did you say she was diagnosed with? Chrono?”

“Chrono-displaced. Like, chronologically displaced. She supposedly gets pulled back or pushed forward by Time at will. She doesn’t know when or where she’s going, but she just does. Logically, I think it’s impossible. I mean how can someone’s body, disappear into small particles and travel and end up in another place at another time? If she can time travel, why haven’t I seen it? Oh right. Dr. Kendrick has made the cure.”

“Dr. Kendrick is?” I ask, though I know that he’s our geneticist.

“A geneticist. He apparently coined the term. I’ve never even met him. But apparently he was granddad’s doctor, too”

Hearing this made things easier to make sense of. His dark blue-grey eyes, ash-blonde hair, and freckles along the cheeks are resemblances of me. No wonder why people say we look like twins. But how do I explain time-travelling to someone who has rejected it all of his life.  His eyes widen when I tell him maybe he should believe him.

“Are you crazy? So what? You time-travel now, too, is that it?”

“There might be more to life than just logic you know. So, where is your mother now?”

“At a rehabilitation centre near this beach. Dad couldn’t bear the thought of her wife locked up in an asylum, so he sent her to a rehabilitation instead. I mean, maybe she really just needs a piece of mind.”

“But, Flynn. She’s telling you the truth. I’m her! I’m from 1997!” I scream out of disbelief.

May 27, 2011 *  2:27 PM

“Is there anyway we can just ask to let her out earlier than the rest? You said she has stopped time-travelling. I have to know how,” I demand.

“No. Unless you’re really desperate, then maybe you can somehow sneak it. Your older self claims that you’re an expert at picking locks. Or we can just wait. Or pay a visit.”

June 05, 2011 * 9:15 AM

The soft breeze gently kisses my skin as we drive by the ocean. My palms are sweaty, my heart’s beating fast and I swear I was going to disappear just then. But I didn’t. We enter through the gate and for a moment you would think that there’s nothing here but a jungle. There it is. It looks like a mansion from the outside, not a rehabilitation centre. As we enter through the steps, we are greeted by the receptionist.

A little later, a lady with long ash blonde hair and greyish-blue eyes enters the room. She smiles at me and I’m stunned to see my thirty-year old self. She turns to Flynn and pinches his cheek until they were flushed.

“I told you, you’re going to meet a younger version of me. I thought that was the only thing that could make you believe,” she says to her son.

“Okay okay, you can time travel. It’s still.. creepy. And I want to see you vanish”, Flynn replies.

 . . .

I ask my older self how can I stop time-travelling. She merely smiles at me and shakes her head.

“You do know that everything is going to be alright, don’t you? I don’t really want to tell you how you get me out here, because everyone should have their own adventures,” she says with a sly wink.

Tuesday, 23 July 2013

Daniel's FanFic Draft/Plan

TOPIC

My topic of choice is the movie "The Matrix" (1999).
I plan on creating a story chronicling the events before the first movie in the matrix series. I have outlined the basic plot from the original movie below, and will follow up with what I plan to do.

GENRE: SciFi/Cyberpunk

DISCLAIMER: the characters, names, and themes of this Fan fiction are the original work of Lana and Andy Wachowski, I do not own any rights to this material and only the ideas within this story are the original work of the author. The source material is taken from The Matrix (1999) and is copyrighted to Warner Brothers. Pictures. This Fanfiction is created purely for entertainment purposes and was inspired by my passion for The Matrix series and love for it's original creators, The Wachowski's.

SYNOPSIS

What we know, from the original "The Matrix" movie.

Earth no longer exists as we know it today. Due to technological advancement, Artificial Intelligence has surpassed Human control. The planet is now overrun by a Mecha of machines known as Sentinels. Humans are now an energy source, grown in pods to supply the machine run world with power.

While our physical bodies rest in pods and exist as human batteries, our minds are kept sedated, wired into a mass virtual reality computer program known as The Matrix. This is the world as we know it today, in which we live. Within The Matrix, humans live out "lives", none the wiser of their actual physical existence.

Deep below the surface of The Earth, near the core, exists "the last human city" known as Zion.  Here a faction of humans live as rebels fighting to regain Earth and to free others trapped in the virtual reality that is our daily lives.



A group of rebels lead by Morpheus, are living inconspicuously aboard a hover ship known as The Nebuchadnezzar, and are leading a mission in search for "The One". A messiah of sorts, powerful enough to defeat the machines, fight the agents (matrix law enforcers that appear as ultra powerful FBI agents) and set free human kind. This leads them to the discovery of Neo who may or may not be that one, as we learn there have been many "Ones" before him.



Morpheus and his crew of super hackers and computer programmers have found a way to hack the matrix  and re-enter the simulated reality, where their understanding of its true nature allows them to manipulate its physical laws, granting them superhuman abilities and acquire knowledge about almost anything. 


WHAT I PLAN TO DO

I would like to tell the story as a series of events in 5 chapters or "episodes", up to the point before the discovery of Neo in the first movie. Elaborating on elusive plot details mentioned in the first movie such as exploring character relationships, and may start after the death of the previous "One". I also plan to introduce my own background on the character of Trinity, this might include her trip to The Oracle and what she was told as much of her story is left unexplained or ambiguous.

These are some Links to other Matrix Fanfictions, the general consensus for the matrix series when it comes to fanfic is that most people tend to use the same characters and invent continuation story lines, post movie canon. Others write alternative stories by entirely made up characters who might exist in the universal concept of The Matrix (as according to the movie, it goes through many "reboots" essentially starting a fresh.

LINKS
  1. FanFiction.net/Matrix 
  2. The Looking Glass
  3. ConstructFic
  4. MatrixFans.net
  5. The Matrix 101


I keep uploading  to my draft and then deleting it, mainly because my FanFic is Long...... I'm not sure what to put here now... Other than to go through the process of what I did... which was write this entire outline, and structure my fanfic as a 5 chapter story... this is obviously going to be over the word count.

Now, I have spent hours meticulously sifting through every line of every paragraph for every error, word and sentence/s that can be removed I have probably cut out 20 percent, from what I originally started with, and have also structured and re structured my sentences and para's so they flow better.

I think You will find it a compelling, and hopefully not TOO long of a read. As Chapter 2 is the second act perse it acts as the BULK of the story.... the rest is very simple and straight forward... but I really feel no less necessary.

FINDING NEO


EPISODE 1: False Idols.

That's another one dead, how much more can we take? Cypher is sitting at the ships control center, another mission failed. He thought Morpheus was a hard task master, or was it that he thought him a man of dreams. A dreamer who put too much hope in one man, one man to save us all? One man to free us from the machines, defeat the sentinels and beat the Agents, how could one person achieve all this? "The One", bullshit, its ridiculous. He was sick of it, but he better keep it to himself he thought. Morpheus was a god among men here, the beacon of hope, or was he just the king of dreams?

Morpheus: Cypher, un-jack me, we lost him. Such a pity it is... I had so much hope for this one. I truly believed.

Cypher sneered, you can't win em all Morph, we tried, he lasted longer than the previous one's, what happened?

Cypher un-jacked Morpheus, opening his eyes, he looked around, he was back in "the real world" he looked around the safety of his ship, he turned to see the lifeless body of the man in the chair next to him, another "One" gone, another hope lost.

Morpheus: What else? Agents. Too many of them, they moved much too fast, we couldn't hold them off... they're getting stronger. He's riddled with bullets... I wanted to help him, I just kept hoping....

Cypher: What? What did you think he could do Morpheus? Dodge bullets? That's impossible, this whole damn thing is IMPOSSIBLE!

Morpheus: Cypher, please. Un-jack him and let us put him to rest. I know you're losing hope, but it is not the way. We must believe in The One, he is out there, I know it. "Now let us gather, I have news... news of a new recruit. There is still hope, and she's waiting for us.

She? It had been a long time since Cypher had been in the company of a woman, the day he agreed to leave The Matrix, to be unplugged, the promise of "freedom" sounded good... power also sounded good. It wasn't until a year went by that Cypher truly missed what he had in the other world... sometimes he wondered if he was really free at all.

Cypher: Well, here's hoping we don't kill her too.